"I can help parents tap into our inner wisdom" looks like it should be "their inner wisdom".
"explore ways to find new pathways to through fear or grief"--there's an extra "to" that shouldn't be there.
And some style/flow suggestions you can take or leave as you see fit:
Just from an aesthetic viewpoint, I'd prefer a little more white space under the main title. Maybe just a line break above the body text.
The second sentence of the first bullet point under "What I do" (the one starting "Support is...") is a bit run-on and required two readings for me to parse it correctly.
"Your baby is so important to you"--I'd remove "so," or change it to a different intensifier. A "so" leads me to expect a "that".
"I can attend to her and her family if she desires that type of support"--there's already an "if" earlier in this sentence; I think the bit after the word "family" is implied and can be omitted.
"through fear or grief towards healing and peace"--I know "towards" rather than "toward" is considered acceptable by some people, but it's still jarring to me to see it in writing.
"help you get what you need to care for, birth and celebrate your child"--I'd prefer an Oxford comma here.
"I also was privileged to serve several families"--I'd leave out "also," but if it needs to be there, I'd phrase it "I was also".
"every one of those special babies touched their families, and me, so deeply"--again, "so" leads me to expect "that".
"I've been continuing to educate myself"--maybe "I've continued to educate myself" instead?
"I feel so blessed and honored"--again, the "so" (here I think it can be left out, as M suggested).
I think the last paragraph of the "About me" section should be moved to the beginning.
If you're looking to add a page of links and recommendations, perhaps you could move the information about cost to either the intro section or the "What I do" section.
If your goal is to get a support network going in your area, maybe it would be a good idea to change the "Looking for support?" section title to something more along the lines of "Contact me" and include an invitation for other support providers to contact you as well as people seeking support.
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"I can help parents tap into our inner wisdom" looks like it should be "their inner wisdom".
"explore ways to find new pathways to through fear or grief"--there's an extra "to" that shouldn't be there.
And some style/flow suggestions you can take or leave as you see fit:
Just from an aesthetic viewpoint, I'd prefer a little more white space under the main title. Maybe just a line break above the body text.
The second sentence of the first bullet point under "What I do" (the one starting "Support is...") is a bit run-on and required two readings for me to parse it correctly.
"Your baby is so important to you"--I'd remove "so," or change it to a different intensifier. A "so" leads me to expect a "that".
"I can attend to her and her family if she desires that type of support"--there's already an "if" earlier in this sentence; I think the bit after the word "family" is implied and can be omitted.
"through fear or grief towards healing and peace"--I know "towards" rather than "toward" is considered acceptable by some people, but it's still jarring to me to see it in writing.
"help you get what you need to care for, birth and celebrate your child"--I'd prefer an Oxford comma here.
"I also was privileged to serve several families"--I'd leave out "also," but if it needs to be there, I'd phrase it "I was also".
"every one of those special babies touched their families, and me, so deeply"--again, "so" leads me to expect "that".
"I've been continuing to educate myself"--maybe "I've continued to educate myself" instead?
"I feel so blessed and honored"--again, the "so" (here I think it can be left out, as M suggested).
I think the last paragraph of the "About me" section should be moved to the beginning.
If you're looking to add a page of links and recommendations, perhaps you could move the information about cost to either the intro section or the "What I do" section.
If your goal is to get a support network going in your area, maybe it would be a good idea to change the "Looking for support?" section title to something more along the lines of "Contact me" and include an invitation for other support providers to contact you as well as people seeking support.