1. There are a limited number of pages you are allowed to have? weird. 2. If you want to be available for abortions, i think you need to mention it on your website. I think there is a natural place for it - you mention d&c there. 3. It is a visually beautiful website! 4. What i do: I feel like this section has some weird qualifiers in it, and could be edited a bit. It would stand on its own, as is, but i believe you can tighten it up with another pass. I prefer 'I can attend', to 'I am willing to attend' - it just sounds more positive to me. Also, 'I have experience' to 'I have some experience'. any means that is most convenient for both of us. ... 'or by means comfortable for the family' I don't think you need the note about only being available if you can find your own child care - it is something that will come up, of course, but the website generally does not go into specifics of how the arrangement will work, and any provider has the right to say 'i can't accept a client at this time', or to discuss that detail when it becomes necessary. It is also alluded to in the payment discussion. 5. About me: While I still feel so blessed and honored to be invited to witness any birth, I feel I have been gifted with knowledge and experience from those precious babies who had to leave us too soon. I'd remove the word 'while' there, and perhaps the word 'still', too. (I feel blessed and honored..., AND I feel I have been...)
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2. If you want to be available for abortions, i think you need to mention it on your website. I think there is a natural place for it - you mention d&c there.
3. It is a visually beautiful website!
4. What i do: I feel like this section has some weird qualifiers in it, and could be edited a bit. It would stand on its own, as is, but i believe you can tighten it up with another pass.
I prefer 'I can attend', to 'I am willing to attend' - it just sounds more positive to me. Also, 'I have experience' to 'I have some experience'.
any means that is most convenient for both of us. ... 'or by means comfortable for the family'
I don't think you need the note about only being available if you can find your own child care - it is something that will come up, of course, but the website generally does not go into specifics of how the arrangement will work, and any provider has the right to say 'i can't accept a client at this time', or to discuss that detail when it becomes necessary. It is also alluded to in the payment discussion.
5. About me: While I still feel so blessed and honored to be invited to witness any birth, I feel I have been gifted with knowledge and experience from those precious babies who had to leave us too soon. I'd remove the word 'while' there, and perhaps the word 'still', too. (I feel blessed and honored..., AND I feel I have been...)
Good luck!